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for A Little Unbroken

by roxierose13

person AidaLily
schedule September 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Lol I just read this and the first one today and found the ending line of this one to be purely hilarious and awesome. I wish I should have started reading H/D fanfics much earlier. Extremely hot real person slash. I think I just squealed Tom during it. Fantastic job.
person Crys/kingzgurl
schedule July 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*dies of laughter* LOVE the end.

That was hot ;) I still tend to have issues with RPF/RPS, even though I've started writing some, but that was fucking hot!
person Juana13
schedule March 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh my gosh, this was bloody brilliant!!! hahahahaha!!! i really wish the world was like Harry Potter. god, life would be so much easier. ... really loved how you got dan and tom together that way. it would be so weird if they actually did that in real life.
anyway, great job!
person L'uke-chan
schedule August 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really, totally, truly, honestly, deeply, utterly LOVE you!!! This fic sooo AMAZING! And original -hearts in her eyes-. I have no idea why u don't write more fics like this or why don't u write anymore hp fics, personally it's none of my business and I'm that nosy^^ and I understand that it does get boring after some time^^. heheh. But I really really REALLY wanna thank you for writing all of these fabulous fics, I may not have reviewed all of the fics I read by you x.x but know that I enjoyed each and every one of them. 'cause you really are one wicked writer^^! I even read the fics you put on ff.net, and I don't really get why don't u put all of your fics there 'cause they are amazing but I'm not gonna ask^^ 'cause as I said I'm not that nosy xD But eh -waves her hand- whatevaa. But u really are depriving some ppl from your utterly mad writing skills^^> Anyway!!!

BRILLIANT FIC!

kudos,
L'uke-chan
schedule June 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was fantastic!
person N00ne
schedule December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yes yes yes! Hot! I'd love to read how things progress from here though *wink*
person Kelsey
schedule August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved it, when I saw the 5th movie I had already been reading H/D slash and I was half expecting some action on screen between the two, needless to say I was disappointed but reading this makes it better.
Kels
schedule June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so funni~~ the end XD
person Tammerz
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness. I'd been wondering if anyone writes fics like this, then presto! I found this on your site. It was a great read.
person NightLo
schedule February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hum...first touch - and that's really fascinating! But obviously that hotel must be blacklisted later for the two - you know, with someone hearing you over isn't much a pleasurable experience...except you are one of the exhibitionists...