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for Good Intentions

by SheWolfe7

person smellysocks
schedule March 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I must say... this is one GREAT GREAT story. The sheer amount of detail and thought going into this is astounding and it really is interesting to read something with this sort of plot. I didn't quite understand the part where Harry had come into his powers and the father and uncle were talking about the malestrom and about what would have happened if nothing had been done to stop Harry... But it was still very image-powerful. I know you don't like the "update soon, plz!" thing, so I won't ask. :D Hopefully rl will get better... I'll wait for you! (*gigglegrin*) Sorry.. XD

<3 smelly
person Anon
schedule March 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it!!!
(sorry for not having time to write a longer review, I promise a throughout commentary as soon as the next chapter comes out!)
person dm
schedule March 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving it. Another great chapter. Keep up the good work.
person demoinc_darkness
schedule March 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
T_T (Tears of joy)

That was beautiful. I love all your stories but this one is definitely my favorite, partly because of the LM/HP. It is my second favorite pairing. I'm glad to see more of Lucius' scheming in this chapter and I can't wait until he final makes a move. I actually didn't find this chapter very confusing. It was very explicative. You are an excellent writer and I can't wait to read what happens next.
person TJ
schedule February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is great and quite fascinating story.
I have enjoyed it greatly and I hope you will manage to continue soon.
Thank you.
person frozenrose
schedule February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW! It seems that I am bound to love all of your stories! Irreverible Destiny was amazing and so is this story. Hope you can update again soon!
person brwm
schedule February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOVE this story!!!
person ranni
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this fic and i hope you will update soon!
person Petunia
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nice!! I read ID and had to read this one straight away, too. Have to say I *really* like your writing style!

I've got a feeling that when Harry finds his mates, his plans will need some serious revising...
person Markie
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic! I've been waiting forever for it to update! But, with this as the result, I'll happily wait that long again.