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prologue" I LOVE it. i have to admit that all the changes were a bit confusing, but it encourages me to keep an open mind as of what's to come. moving on to chapter one now, see you then *waves good bye*

ch. 1; oh dear, that did indeed muck up his plamns a bit. - i adore the long chapters!!!

I actually sat down and read most of the night. Looking forward to the next chapter... I have no gripes or suggestions as to how your story progresses.

Wow.. this chapter was absolutely brilliant!!! :) From now on, I'm gonna bookmark this story :) To think that I could have read this chapter so much earlier :D ANyway, love this story and I love you for writing :D

Hi, I just read all of your chapters and I'm really enjoying it. I love the detail you put in your story, although I kind of get confused with all the names, but I'm normally bad with names so it doesn't reflect on your story any. =) I like the idea of an alternate world where Anantas (Spelling? sorry bad with names) , aka harry can have a second chance. I'm glad that the creature dwelling inside him seems to only have the best intentions for him. Lusicus (again bad with names) is funny how he is obsessed with him. I'm very pleased with the way you are portraying this world's Voldamort (and again, the name thing). I love how he has an Uncle. The Uncle is kind of a funny character, I can't wait til he meets 'Harry' (sorry the only name I know how to spell). The thing within 'Harry' seems to want a body of it's own to "do something" with 'Harry'. I'm hoping that "something" is lemony fresh (Lol), but this is a Vol/Harry pairing right? I'm guessing this thing inside 'Harry' wants to use Voldamort's body. If I'm right does that meen that Voldamort loses control of himself or is it a symbiotic relationship. I like how you aren't leaving any characters out in this story even if they don't play an important role, ex. Nicolis Flamal or the Marader (sorry, sorry, sorry, name thing again). Okay I think I'm done yapping because if I write anymore I'll probably butcher more names. Lol. Love your story, if possible could you e-mail me at fenugreek_spice@yahoo.ca when the next chapter is post. Thanks so much. I hope to read more in the future.
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Very interesting story. Very original. Keep going!
update

I absolutely adored this last 2 chapters. Though I must say it was really a coincidence I read them. I have you on alert on forever fandom, but there you haven't updated after the 3rd chapter :(.
Anyway, now I know to look for updated on this site.
Love this story!!!

Holy freakin' crap... You're one hell of a planner. This is one of the most in-depth plots I've ever stumbled upon. I myself have little patience for research, so I can't help but be awed by the lengths you've gone to here. You've made this so much your own that I almost want to take it out of the HP section and put it in the Originals. Of course you can't 'really' do that, for obvious reasons. It does often make me forget that connection though. The tone is really consistent. This constant air of mystery and intrigue kept me glued to it until I'd finished all six chapters in one sitting.

The background with the fiend is puzzling, I'm left wondering if the Harry/Anastas character can technically be said to 'exist' anymore. It's hard to wrap your brain around it you know? He's like this sad patch-job of real and fabricated memories and characteristics and lingering goals. Goals which don't quite fit in with the situation anymore. I'm anxiously waiting now to see how he reacts to the change in Voldemort's situation in this world.

Anyway I'll stop rambling at you for now. What I really want to say is, you're doing an absolutely 'brilliant' job with this. I really hope to see a conclusion someday (not to pressure you or anything. Take your time, by all means) because something this good deserves to be seen to the end.

update soon *kisses*

um.. I love you? I love this story. I love your writing. I hardly never read chapter stories that aren't finished but I gave this one a shot and fell in love. I'm holding my breath to see what happens. As to side pairings... At this point I would be thrilled with any pairings. :) Sirius and James sounds good for starters though.