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Is there more? Please tell me there's more!!!

This is a very good story. I am quite glad i found it. I would love to read more and patiently wait for more. You can email me any time. My email is yumehanta221988@gmail.com.

Lovely story! I like it thus far and am looking forward to more. Thanks for sharing!

Okay, so you still left all the 'adult' scenes edited out on the ADULTfanfiction site?

Why?

I'm expected to dig through and find a third site where it is posted? Am I also supposed to answer three questions and complete a quest first?

Rather confused by this choice.

W/e it's a great story anyways.

I know that I'm reviewing this five years after you wrote it, which should say a lot about how well you write! I'm greatly enjoying all of it. I have one "oops" that you doubtless already know -- in this chapter, you have Albus Dumbledore with a wife named Sharon, but in prior chapters he has a husband.

On to the rest of the story!

WyrdSmith

I know you're on indefinite hiatus, but since I just stumbled upon this lovely fic. Simply wanted to leave a few words. :)

This is wonderfully written and very engaging. I love how you've done so much research for this and the interesting plot twists you have here. Thankfully you have those footnotes to help clarify anything. It's greatly useful.

Hopefully you'll have something up for GI as soon as you can. Would it be possible if you send me a notification if you do?

Take as much time as you need. While I have enjoyed both Good Intentions and Irreversible Destiny and hope that you will finish Good Intention in the future, right now you just need to take some time to yourself. I will be waiting patiently for your return.

I really love this story. I read it once a REALLY long time ago, and finally found it again. (Yay!) I love how there are simply so many levels to the story and there is so much going on. How much the story jumps around tends to be very confusing (especially when you are trying to figure out where you left off last time you read it, Lol XD) but I argue with myself that a lot of the secondary stuff that is going on is also vital to the story. I truly cannot wait to see what transgressions will happen with Harry (err...Anastas XP). It seems so longggggg, and the good stuff seems so far offffffff(whine) I don't want to have to wait to get to the good stuff. So update soon~! I can't wait to see what happens. (Lol, and hopefully we can get to the yummy slashy-ness soon.)

~Nasyki loves you <3

Heya!

Now it's my sencond time I'm reading your story. And I must say I'm really fascinated. It has a good reasoning why it happens that way and I kind of like the written 'thinking' of the other characters. Your story is really whole and not just some copied nonsense. (I already can't count just how many I've read of them.) I'm quite happy I found your fanfic. It's really good written (even if my english isn't at its best *g*).
Keep on the good work. I'm looking forward for the upcoming chapters!

Alisse

I have completely forsken sleep in order to read this story! I'm enamored. No criticizims thus far. However, I would like to know more about Harry's powers as a Harpy. Awaiting your next chapter with bated breath!
-Kayla-