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August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4: Lady...you should be very, very glad that this story is completed, because I would have tracked you down and chained you to the keyboard, demanding that cliffie to be bridged. Severus in her shower??? Oh, meltdown city. You do have a way girl :)))
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August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 5: Oh girl, you have weaved one powerful tale here, magic on his skin, sparks and runes running over Hermione's body...and very erotic foreplay...mmm mmm. So good girl.
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August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Gods, what an imagination you have. Lucius and Severus being divided. I'm just stunned. Stunned. I suspected something like this but the storyline is so good, that made no difference...the proof of an excellent storyteller.
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August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A truly entertaining and amazing story. It had everything. Mystery, intrigue, action, adventure, sensuality and highly satisfying lemons. A work of art you have here, Lady. I truly enjoyed every word of this fic. Kudos on a fine, fine job. ***
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August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful story penned by your enchanted quill. I loved the very original plot and it was beautifully written. Bravo! Toodles.
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August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
glad to see you reposting, I hope you'll post a new chapter in the wake.
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August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
what a great ending!! I am so glad Sev turned out how he did!! hehe and she admitted to liking his harsh treatment hehe
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August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh my gods! what a wonderful break from the ordinary.
i must confess that, of late, i find i can't read much fan fiction. i've come across too many stories that don't hold my interest or have such a great premise and then are disappointing because the author didn't manage to capture the idea the way i felt they should have. however, i had no problems with this story. it was excellently written, despite a few spelling errors here and there. i simply am in envy over the explanation as to what made Snape the unbending bastard that he was.
i found the characters credible and the scenario well thought out. and there was good humor in there, along with good drama and a spattering of hotness.
i really loved it and i was sorry to see that it was, in essence, short. thank you for entertaining me. it stole me away from my own writing, which is hard to do these days. the only thing i might possibly quibble about is the fact that Norbert was a Norwegian Ridgeback. still..... it isn't enough to have made me stop reading.
brava! *claps enthusiastically*
~blessings~
ldf
i must confess that, of late, i find i can't read much fan fiction. i've come across too many stories that don't hold my interest or have such a great premise and then are disappointing because the author didn't manage to capture the idea the way i felt they should have. however, i had no problems with this story. it was excellently written, despite a few spelling errors here and there. i simply am in envy over the explanation as to what made Snape the unbending bastard that he was.
i found the characters credible and the scenario well thought out. and there was good humor in there, along with good drama and a spattering of hotness.
i really loved it and i was sorry to see that it was, in essence, short. thank you for entertaining me. it stole me away from my own writing, which is hard to do these days. the only thing i might possibly quibble about is the fact that Norbert was a Norwegian Ridgeback. still..... it isn't enough to have made me stop reading.
brava! *claps enthusiastically*
~blessings~
ldf