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for Family Whore

by SuicideKing

person Hermyone
schedule March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I couldn't agree more with pettrum. This is a brilliant story enjoyed by a lot of people judging by the number of positive reviews. It's one of my favorites on AFF, like your other stories. Hope to see another chapter soon and maybe the start of Ginny And Co 4th Year, 3rd year was awesome.
person pettrum
schedule March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Continue please?
person pettrum
schedule March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just to point this out to the reviewers out there. This is a work of fiction. It is not meant to be realistic, or to show a morality. In real life we know that incest tends to be bad, that pedophilia seriously damages people, and that these things should not happen. But that doesn't mean that *writing* it, *reading* it, or enjoying a completely ficticious *fantasy* of it is dangerous. In real life, sex can be awkward, messy, and downright unenjoyable (not that it always is, but it can be) but nobody wants to read about that. Sometimes we just want a good piece of smut to play into our fantasies.
schedule February 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can see that you are begging for reviews
(that sounded like a slam, but I assure you it was not meant as one)
so I will give you one.

I really really like this story even though it is twisted and I should be appalled by it.
But for some strange reason it really turns me on.
schedule January 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
for the love of God continue!!!!!!!!!
person Anon
schedule January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Mishra
schedule January 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I wholeheartedly agree to what "An Honest Opinion" has said and would like to add my own two cents. In my opinion it is astonishing how many reviews one can net on this side by writing a story which is completely farfetched, with all characters as far ooc than possibly, just by throwing child porn into the mix. Don't get me wrong, I am certainly not a prude, but that's just really, really sick. The fact that troll-reviews like "OMG Ginny is kinky for a ten-year old !!!!11111" are left, proves Opinion's point that people are getting wrong ideas by this fic. Ten years olds are not kinky and quite frankly they should not be. Like your other fics, this is a simply whorefic without a single piece of plot and while I don't have a problem with this in general, it is not what fanfiction was originally meant to be.

Well anyway, I did not mean to insult you, but just wanted to show that Opinion is not alone.

Yours
Mishra
person Pax_Out
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
No dissappointment, none what so ever. Just what I"ve come to expect.

Pax
person an honest opinion
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok, this fic is wrong on so many levels!
It kinda scares me how much positive feedback you get, or comments that just say "your story is hot".
The way you portray incest as an everyday occurence in the Weasly household and show Ginny as a "cum-hungry whore" is, in my opinion, a little dangerous in the way that porn for guys is dangerous.
I'm sure many underaged guys might read your fic and wank to it. I think they'll lose their respect for women and don't realise the problem of incest.
I know this is just supposed to be fiction and for fun, but I think you should at least put up an exclaimer that shows you are aware that incestuous relationships are ethically problematic and not allowed.
I'm not against incest-fic in general, if it has high standard and shows the conflict of the involved parties. In my opinion you shouldn't take things this lightly.
Please don't be insuled by this feedback and see it as constructive criticism.
person an honest opinion #2
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I forgot to mention that pedophilia is another serious topic you should inform your readers about. In your fic Ginny is 10 years old. This fiction is, generally speaking, a type of children porn, which is a punishable offence. think about it.