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April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You need a native English speaker to beta read your work. It has awkward phrasing and some problems with subject/verb agreement.
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April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh no! not a cliff hanger. i want more what happens
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April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic. That was an incredible ending to the battle. Thank you so much for sharing it with us and many thanks to your new beta. Nicely done. It is not a problem staying with this story as it has captured my interest from the first chapter. Thank you for bringing it to us.
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April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
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April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great job!!!!
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April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
BTW, if you ever have a chance, you really should read one of septentrion's HP stories. You will enjoy them. I keep hoping Furry Matchmaking will be updated when this story is over. I can only imagine the time and energy put into Lendoren! But we thank you for putting your own stories on hold to do so.
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April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
severus/erwin didn't die right?!
i think i would cry!!
cant wait for the next chapter!!
i think i would cry!!
cant wait for the next chapter!!
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April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Boy that was a great chapter and i really look forward to the rest of the story and i really thank you for your time and effort put into translating this story! :)
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March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I Love this story and think it is the most interesting story I have had the pleasure to read so far. I hope you continue to write stories just as interesting and marvalous as this one.
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March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH MAN!!! RIGHT AT THE GOOD PART! well i do hope the next part is going to be soon. love all that you thanks!