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April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very much so, thank you. always a pleasure to be able to read the story. i will look forward to the next! :)
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April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry I'm running behind on the reviewing. Don't you hate it when RL interferes with your online reading? LOL Just kidding. Wow! what an amazing battle. Very well done. Things are touchy with Severus and Hermione right now and I'm heading back to read the next chapter. I'll see you on the other side.
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April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really adored this chapter. it's really good.. i just found this story today and started reading it. the story is really good and I really like the sex scene, it was well written
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April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Soooo good! I hope Hermione and Severus are okay.
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April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
im all smiles now..
and i don't know if you a catholic- but if you are HAPPY EASTER!
if not- HAPPY SUNDAY!
cant wait for the next chapter
and i don't know if you a catholic- but if you are HAPPY EASTER!
if not- HAPPY SUNDAY!
cant wait for the next chapter
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April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it.
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April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
thank-you-for being so faithful in your work to translate and post this story. it has being such a pleasure to read this story and i am glad that you have done it. i will be waiting for the next update! :)
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April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm really liking this story, and I really like all the potential here for plot development. Here are a few things that I would change at the very end of this chapter, from a purely linguistic standpoint:
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April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
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April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
An enchanting story. Told in a charming manner. I realize how trying translating can be, I do some from German and Norwegian. For the most part, very well done. There are some small ideomatic awkwardnesses and some trouble with homophones and tiny grammatical errors, but in the main very well done. For we poor fellows that don't speak French, I am grateful that you are translating this fine story.