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Haha just a bit, but I think you've done fabulously! Translating is really tough!

Thank you for reminding me about Gryffin and his companion. I had forgotten/missed that detail, although I think I forgot it because I rather like him and his support and teasing of Erwin at the beginning of the story. Well, NEWTs are finished and the unicorns were again at play. I'm glad that Erwin made a definitive stand about the shoring up of the defenses/wards of Hogwarts. They deserve the time to move slowly now. I'm looking forward to your next update. Enjoy your week.

Thank you for the wonderful update, but I do have a question. I thought Hermione was taking more than five courses yet there were only 5 days of exams, one exam on each day. Did I miss something? Can't wait for the next one!

i have to honestly say that i am jealous. i have wanted to visit france espically france sense i can remember. i wish that someday i can see it all, i wish it so much that my heart actual hurts. i also wish that i could speak french. maybe someday with a lot of practice.
so thank you very much for translating this story. i am very saddened that it will soon come to an end i will greatly miss our little conversations. if you are ever in the mood to read some really bad english write me sometime -k- at princescrystalcitten@yahoo.com or at gmail by the same name!

(p.s. if you already got a review simialar to this one just disregard one of them for i tried to have it posted during there "daily down time" :) )

Ooh I cant wait for the next chapter, I hate that this wonderful piece is coming to a close! Please hurry with the next installment a week is so long to wait!

I like it. Please update soon.

Another great chapter! Cannot wait to read more. :)

I admit that I got curious and went and read the French version, but I think you're doing fabulously with the translations and it is very comprehensible.

It must have been your crossed fingers that got me through my finals because I had a close call in one of my classes ;). I sincerely thank you for wishing me luck. My finals are now completed and grades are in and I didn't make out too badly. But now that I'm back at work I'm not pulling up my computer as much-today was the first day I've really been on in over a week. Which I guess might be a good thing cause now I only have two days to wait for an update :). This chapter made me laugh. The centaur thing was entertaining. Keep up the good work translating, I really do admire you for all the work you're putting into this for our enjoyment.

Superb story, good translation, though a bit rough in spots. However, one thing bothers me. In chapter 21 where Snape and Hermione are talking about time turners, Sev doesn't believe Hermione when she says that she and Harry saved Sirius because he really was innocent and that Pettigrew was an animagus and alive. Sev says that he doesn't believe that Pettigrew is an animagus. Then later he admits that Pettigrew still brags about returning Voldemort to life after the triwizard, indicating that Sev knew that Pettigrew is still alive. If he knew that Pettigrew was still alive, wouldn't that prove that Sirius was innocent?
I can understand him doubting that Pettigrew was an animagus, but surely as a spy, surely with Pettigrew bragging, he would also kno that Sirius was innocent and that it was Pettigrew who betrayed the Potters.
Just a note. I really do love this story, and hope this can be clarified for future readers.
KaS