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by septentrion

person firewall
schedule October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 16 - Well that was interesting. It's a good thing that she didn't let loose with her powers since she is apparently much more powerful than others in the Castle. She didn't exactly embrace the fact that her crush and her partner were one and the same. LOL I can't wait to see how her mind process brings her around. Once again thank you so much for sharing this story with us. I know it is an incredible amount of work for you and believe me, it doesn't matter how long it takes you between chapters, I'll still read them.
person lisa
schedule October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ugg cliffie. man just when it was getting good. nd lol poor Hermione doesn't know she is telling Severus that she is lusting after him. I can't wait to see his response or how he wiggles out of not revealing that it is him she is talking to , that he is her mate. She's got him cornered now I believe. it will be fun to see how he reacts. Keep up the good work. and I really like this story. thanks for trying so hard to get it translated and to bring some joy to those of us who don't speak or read french. the betas and you are awesome. Goodluck.
person Citten
schedule October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well this is ceartainly going to change things but the questions are is severus going to do this slytherin stlye and try and get her to confess who she is attracted to or is he going to do it lover (geryfendor) stlye and rush things because of emotions!? i can't wait to find out! hope all is going well! :)
person firewall
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whooohoooo! She finally admitted that Snape attracts her. I can't wait to see Erwin's reaction to this revelation! Once again, thank you so much for sharing this story with us. Another fantastic story.
person Citten
schedule October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well i loved that chapter like all the others and enjoyed it. now remind me why severus doesnot revile himself to hermione just to save himself from her wrath or to what he thinks she will do when she finds out the truth? well hope the next chapter is up soon!
person firewall
schedule September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Terrific chapter. Hermione is definitely growing in strength. It will be interesting to see them finally meet up. Thanks again for sharing this wonderful story.
person thunderbella
schedule September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Keep going this is a great story. I am really enjoying it. Too bad I flunked out it frecnh or I would volunteer to help just to get a peek at what comes next.
person Megan Consoer
schedule September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Jeni
schedule September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is great stuff, seriously. I love it. Well done with all the translating.
I do French, but I dont have the skill to translate it myself, or I'd help you instantly!
However, have you considered using a translator, such as babelfish? You could then go over it and perfect any errors it made, but it should speed the process up.. . . heck, if you want, ill give it a go!
person Megan Consoer
schedule September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?