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Now that was a good use for the timeturner!!! Nothing like a hot, steamy shower to heat things up! Nicely done. I'm looking forward to them going to the community. It will be interesting to see how Hermione's friends deal with the Lendoren. Thanks for sharing this chapter and I'm looking forward to next week's.

This was hot! I liked it. It seems Snape is finally putting his foot down. At last!

Your translation to English is okay, but grammar is being ignored for speed. You also need to remember that part of your readership are sight impaired and need to increase the size of the print without having to use the bar at the bottom of the screem to move the page. This is because along with the sight impairment, tracking with the eyes can also be a problem. Please remember to transfer to html format not one of the others so the print well adjust to the screen.

As to the story, I feel that it is based in French Legend which I am unfamilier. I like the story and the characters. But I would like to know more about which legends it is based upon.

This story is wonderful! I don't know french so i'm VERY greatful for your translations! Please keep me updated on Updates my schedual keeps me from checking back regularly so I would love to have some kind of notice! Anyways concidering this isn't your original story i'm just going to say wonderful translations!

Lisa

Ch 23 - Poor Severus. I can sympathize with his battle between doing his love and his duty. It is also good that the two can empathize with the other's feelings. They are still walking a fine line as they get to know each other better.

Thank you for the time and energy you and your team put into the story's translation. I look forward to the weekends when I'll have a new chapter to read.

oh wow..amazingly this keeps getting better with every new chapter...loved the few questions Snape asked of the boys about the map....lol....

they are just so intersting to listen to and watch when they are arguing-severus and hermione. (did you just notice that i stated that as if i have just watched it on a movie or film? boy thats sad.) thanks for the update and i hope life is treating you well. until next chapter. :)

OOH Good. I like that Harry, Ron and Ginny know exactly what is going on and likewise with Snape.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Lol that was funny. They do love to argue it seems. cant wait for more. and lol i really like the story so i can wait for the lemons. the rather heated arguments are quite entertaining. So more more more please. Please update soon.

don't worry, i really did not mean you to go back but just to let you know. thank you! besides all it does it makes me slow down beside the stories to good to not just egnore it ;) i am really looking forward to what else happened to that conversion or right after it (he he.. he must have been really mad.)