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for On the Wings of Change

by Dreamwind

person rose
schedule October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well i like snape but not with harry i like sev better with draco so i vote charile with harry or mr. malfoy aka draco's father to be with harry
person Draconayzia
schedule October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O_O Yikes! Please update soon!

I can't believe Mione lost it like taht. I thought it'd be Ginny! Eek!
person The w00t Girl
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
As much as it seems likely to be a net fic, it really shouldn't be one, just for the simple fact that you have it in the male/male selection. The pairings wise, it seems more of a likely hood to be either between Fred and George or Charlie but they seem more interested in Katie.

So I'd have to say, that it should be, between either Severus Snape or Draco but either one, needs to be more apart of the story and interact more with Harry.

Voting for: HP/SS or HP/DM
person Prince
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Charlie/Harry
Charlie/Harry
Charlie/Harry
Charlie/Harry
Charlie/Harry
Charlie/Harry
Charlie/Harry
Charlie/Harry
Charlie/Harry
person annie
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I found it!!! I've been looking everywhere for this fic! I still think it should be HARRY/SEV/CHARLIE! lol
I'm glad you fixed the story. I really was confused on how everything was turning out and how Harry just knew that Kerr was a friend and not foe. LoL up date soon please!!!
person Huntresss
schedule September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like your story alot.. I like seeing creature inheritances play out so I hope you don't plan on abandoning us mid way thru.

As for pairing... since it's in the slash area and I really hate seeing Harry female pairings... i want
Severus/Harry/Charlie.. I love Triads..
person skydreamer22 (also too lazy to sign in)
schedule September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The review you had left me made me curious so I decided to check out your story. You shouldn't knock it, I really like it and would love to read more. As for the pairing suggestion I can't decide but I would say HP/CW, HP/DM or HP/SS. But Charlie also would be good with Karr, I just like the idea of the dragon tamer being involved with a dragon. I want Harry w/ Draco for a the irony of someone who's name means dragon w/ a dragon. And I want Harry with Snape cause I love that pairing and the idea of Snape going after Harry for potions ingredients is amusing. Now that I've blabbed on about what I want please write more so I can find out what happens.
person Skipper
schedule September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hello!

I just wanted to give my vote on the hole paring thing.
I vote on a Harry/Severus paring.
It is my favorite paring, I also like Herry/Draco, so I would be totaly ok with that, Harry/Charlie is a ok paring, but it might be really weird with that paring since Charlie is fond of dragons, so you wont really know if he's really in love with Harry, or it is because Harry is a dragon who is sometime in human form.
I don't think you should make it a Harry/Katie paring since it is kind of borring.
Threesomes are hard, you easily get jelous, I've seen it too many times.

Thanks for reading my review.

Ps. If you send opdate notises, I'd appresiate one.
schedule August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
5, 6, or 7 is still my choice. :D

The story seems to flow much better. But still it seems like it just moving from point a to point b, with no inside for moving the plot along. It doesn't flow like a story, but more like a game I guess.

Keep up the good work, coolsa.
person Khyssa
schedule August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is an interesting story. I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with it. My vote is for Draco/Harry with Draco/Harry/Charlie as a close second.