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for On the Wings of Change

by Dreamwind

person lunamoonangel
schedule August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great story pairing should be either 3,5,6 or 7 not bothered which just like those ones
person Annie
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HARRY/SEV/CHARLIE!!!!!!! Please lol....anyways its a really good story, I'm just sorry I i didn't find it when it first came out, been having in'net problems, lol. I really like it but I'm really confused on some parts, which you'll probably explain later so i'm not going to waste your time asking about, unless it doesn't get cleared up at which point i'll be forced to ask. LoL :-)

I hope your muse(s) is/are good to you.
Happy Writtings.
person Brandy
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really think it should be h/s/c as charlie is an expert on dragons which means he won't be too freaked out on someone of the behaviors Harry is sure to have now and severus with them as he's a very intelligent, capable person who will keep Harry grounded with his presence. Harry should of course be the sub of the three, because he's so cute when he is. lol Unless you don't want to do it that way......

ITS REALLY GREAT!!! lol
person Sarah
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HARRY SEV CHARLIE!!! GREAT STORY!!!
person Lucy
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sev/har/char

so kewl!!!
person Mark
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
charlie/sev/harry

i really love it but there are some parts where harry met kerr that really confused me...what did she say to him that somehow had him knowing she was a girl, that her name was....w/e and that she wasn't a threat. you really need to get into more detail.
person david
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HARRY SEVERUS CHARLIE!

great, some parts confusing but great.
person akuma_river
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
5, 6, or 7 is my choice. :D

I like it so far, but the story seems segmented like we are missing things.

It doesn't exactly have a smooth flow, it seems to jump from area to area, with no smooth transition.

Keep up the good work, coolsa.
person Anon
schedule August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
harry x severus x draco
harry x severus x draco
harry x severus x draco
harry x severus x draco
harry x severus x draco
harry x severus x draco
harry x severus x draco
harry x severus x draco
person Miz Valeer
schedule August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ahhhhhh!! Number five!...number five...orrrr 7...hm..FIVE! :D *dances*