rate_review Reviews

cool, im interested

This is a good story so far...but a little cliche. Though I do like a cute story, it's a little too much like everyone else who writes about Hermiones new year. Perhaps you could try to put more of your own touches to it so it doesn't sound like everyone elses. Keep on writting because honestly I'm not trying to flame it or anything, just some contructive pointers :]

Love stories like this.
Hope for more soon.