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July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's somewhat confusing... But the idea is good.
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January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really love your writing style...
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August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You have some really good ideas here. I find myself facinated by the idea of her feeling him inside her skin. I just find the over all work to be fractured and difficult to read. However, it really smoothed out and became more cohesive at the end. Keep going and see where it leads you! Really creative!
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August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
First of all, correct the spelling errors in your summary and more readers will be willing to look further. Also, I would try to avoid italicizing your entire story.
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August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Way to get right on it and fix the errors! :) Kudos to you.