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Fabulous new chapter, well worth the wait. I am really, really enjoying this story and do hope you post it at Sychophant Hex, and let the SS/HG fans there enjoy it as well. I look forward to the next chapter!

I really have been waiting for this update! Yay for Severus supporting house unity-- finally. It's a great story and I like the plot. Sorry about your RL problems, so only a small(teeny tiny one) for another update soon. juls

ooo yay update!!!!! this was a really good chapter. I like how you're building thier relationship slowly. Everything so far seems very believable and you've kept everyone in character(YAY!) My guess at severus' ailment would be migraines plus the after effects of some curse or other that blend the two to make them more intense, err or something. sorry for not making any sense, have been studying for organic chemistry for the past 10 hrs & have another 12 to look forward to YIPEEEE!!!! Thanks for the break. ~Lily

Hi Ice Crystal - please send me an email when you have time at rubywolf99@hotmail.com. This would be in regards to your recent trip to the GSA meeting. So, your story is going great! Keep up the good work!

I really like this story, so I'm hoping you get around to updating over thanksgiving break. I saw that you were planning to post @ sycophant hex. I'd start putting a few chapters in the queue as I hear it's really long. happy writing! ~Lily

Tock, tock, tock (looking searchingly around) - anyone at home??
Hope you're well; wanted to let you know that I'm missing your story.

Knock, knock, knock - anyone here?
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oh man! Snape losing conciousness as she kisses him on the forehead. That HAS to count as an evil cliffie!!! I look forward to reading more of your fascinating story.

Yes the real world is a drag with two full time jobs. But Pickles needs to stay home and be a house wife. Little ones need there mommies. Due to having allergies it would seem to me that she just opened his sinuses. Maybe the living in the bottom of a castle is not for him after all. He was fine in the out country. I am allergic to pennsylvania but I have to live here. When we go on vacation I dont suffer with allergies. Maybe she can get him a script for allegra or some other non drosy allergy med. Well I hope that you can get out of the real world more soon and post another update. Your story realy does make one think. Well until next time. Bill

This has to be one of the best I've read.
You manage to keep it tied together throughout the chapters - one day apart, minute, or month. It is very unique in concept and unlike any I've seen before.
I have to say, I was quite glad when you did not describe the vomit in detail...