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I am really enjoying your story. I can't wait for another chapter. I am also glad you brought Ron and Harry into the picture. I wanna know what she gave Snape for his headaches though.

Another wonderful chapter hun. Shows the depth of the feelings that are hidden hehe or just recognized. Being a migraine sufferer I understood those pills, and the pain and well- the disparation just to get that damn bottle to open. Hehe. I wonder if Sev will understand that the power that stregthed that healing spell was L.O.V.E.? And thanks for readin EtS- I am so having trouble with that next chapter. (CoL on the other hand is flowing- weird.) Hopefully Snape works with Harry and ickle Ron now that he has been approached. (We know he will- rofl.) Ok another great chapter dear. Email is up there if you ever need anything ~~juls

I wouldn't call it domestic violence -- rather that, through overwhelming physical pain and extreme emotion, Severus was driven into a darker, more animalistic frame of mind. This is something that Hermione didn't bargain on. In my book, Death Eaters don't get to retain the title of human because some of the horrible things they do that, er, break the social contract, to put it mildly. In this case Severus went back to a state of mind that was probably easier to sustain - strike out before you are struck, like a dog that has been beaten one too many times and decides to bite back.

(now I'm not saying Snape is a dog, we'll leave that up to Sirius :-p )

Wow, that really throws a spanner in the works! How's he going to get around this one without major psychological/psychopharmological help? I'm currently reading a story on another archive where Severus does something similar to Hermione, only with horribly violent words and insults. In that author's notes she comments that sometimes you have to hit rock bottom before you can start climbing back up. This seems to me a similar moment.

Jeez, I didn't realize Ashwinder had gotten so hoity-toity. Try The Petulant Poetess instead, that's currently the archive I hit first when looking for my Snape Fic fix. They have high standards but don't have problems with "the President's English" as it were. I've got a couple of items posted over there that were thoroughly looked over by their hard-working admins, whom I admire very much.

Hope to read more of your wonderful writing soonest! You're inspiring me to go forth and write a bit more for my threesomes-moresomes fic I have going here at AFF.

And just what is in that box she throws at him? Percocet?

Go Hermione!
I hope she does something to Minerva/Albus. Those two can be such twits.
More snow here. AS well as temperatures dropping. There has been some churches canceling services for tomorrow.
Was "OWL (On-line Wizarding Library) and The Petulant Poetess" suggested to you? I can't remember. Do you have a livejournal account that lists updates and other projects? Let me know if you do.

Dont tell Bill He may have a stroke. HA ha. Although you can think my skin is that thin if you keep updating two chaptors a week.I understood what was going on with those two as I read the chaptor. I think that most people are acustom to Snapes disposition and Grangers bull headedness, to think it is anything more that tough love between them. You do know it is hard to get people to do what is best for themselves dispite our best effort. Even with out a self lothing. And look both of them see thing is a different light. A better understanding of what makes the other tick if you will. Well See you on the next update. Hope you make your deadline. Bill

Chrystal-- this chapter was moving. It flowed and was an eye opener for both of them. Few understand both dynamics (Snap and Hermione) like you have portrayed so far in this story. Snape would sacrifice life for her-- he knows it now lol. Hermione the know it all, thought she knew it all and almost died because of it. But love conquers all.
As for reading my stories- they will be there when you get the time and the chance, dear. If you went to HPFF you'd be shocked to see 19 of them. huggles ~~juls

I was so glad to see the added chapter. I look forward to reading more... Please update soon as I don't know how long I can wait patiently!

SD

OMG! After that little scene in the hallway, you have to update as soon as you possibly can. Too bad a swift kick in the ass wouldn't work this time, he's been kicked too many times. Man, oh, man you sure know how to keep this story gripping for your readers!!!!!

ditto to Pickle's p.s.!

Oh man! I have loved reading this story so much I have just spent the last four hours sitting here devouring it. PLEASE Update soon! I can't wait to see where you take it next!

ShilohDarke