AFF Fiction Portal
person menolly
schedule September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I thought I would give this ship a try and am so thrilled that I did because I found this incredible story. That was amazing! What a beautiful heart-wrenching tale you have told here. Your descriptions are exquisite particularly at the end, describing the broken vase and crumbled flowers. This is really an amazing character study of Remus, denying himself love and of Sirius' desparation. I love the angst in this. Great job!
person Jersey Princess/The Miss Marauders
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Now that was depressing! Very good, but still depressing. One of those "you don't know what you've got til it's gone" things...
x Cazzy x