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for Blood, Love and Betrayal

by gryffindorblood85

person lisa
schedule August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow I love it so far. Hope you update soon. and ohhh such a cliffie. can't wait to see if it's malfoy or possibly someone else. hehehe. Keep up the good work.
person anonymous reader
schedule August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
!!! What's with chapter three's cliffhanger???!!! GAH! Give the update fast! I'm dying to find out what happens! You've definitely got an interesting concept for making a story... And I'm thoroughly enjoying what you've served up so far. However, I think you should proofread your work to avoid some of your grammar and spelling mistakes. There aren't that many, but, to prove to be an even more amazing writer that you are, you should avoid making small errors like that. Good luck with the future chapters! And REALLY, UPDATE SOON! Fabulous work so far!
person isolde
schedule August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*pout* ur such a meany. update soon and get on w/ the damn steamy scene.
person isolde
schedule August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay, this seems promising. plz update sooon, or when u do plz make the chap's longer, i really wanna read more. (sry to b pushy)
^.-x
person serenamarie06
schedule August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW I love this I think this is the first one that i have read with harry and hermione as long lost twins.....nice please update soon....
person livelifelovehgdm
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Wow! Please update! I really enjoy your new idea!

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person Luthien
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Bit like Star Wars, isn't it? Luke and Leia and the girl being the hidden one the bad guy doesn't know about... I really like it! Hope for more soon!
person Avanell
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good story...just please update soon! I'm dying to see the hermine/draco interactions.
person Lexy
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this. Very good start. There's not enough HarryHermione twin fics. It's always Hermione is a Zabini. I can't wait for you next update!
person firewall
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sounds like a good start. The title is most ominous: a harbinger of things to come?