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for Blood, Love and Betrayal

by gryffindorblood85

person Koppe
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great! I'm loving it so far, hope you'll update soon.
Apart from a few typos ("profit" rather than "prophet") in the past couple of chapters (10-11), this story is great (although I love pregnant/baby-stories).
I very much looking forward to how people -- especially Draco, Lucius, Harry, Voldemort and Pansy -- will react to the quadruplets. I'm also looking forward to what Harry's research into his bloodline will yield.
Keep up the great work (and update soon),
-Koppe
person Jan
schedule October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
God can't wait till your next update, this story is great.
Keep up the great writing. ^_^
UPDATE SOON PPPLLLLEEEAASSE...
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person Dee Dee
schedule October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
. Wonder if Draco will keep looking for Hermione. I am sure he did not believe the headmaster. And I can
person TiffANY
schedule October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
FANTASTIC story!

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update as fast as you can, though I know that you are busy.

By the way I loved 'love is life' it made me cry!

You're a BRILLIANT writer and keep up the AMAZING work!
person lisa
schedule September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay you updated. i am sorry you are so busy but I love the story. and hope you find time. Keep up the good work. and I must say it's soo sad for Draco. I feel so bad for him and Hermione. and Hermy is wrong for leaving without saying goodbye but I understand why she didn't. Well Keep up the good work, check back again soon.
person Experience My Dreams
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it!!!! Keep going!!!
person Jess
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE SOON, UPDATE SOON, UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!
person Anon
schedule September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cannot wait for chapter 8, Shes totally pregnant!! HHAHAHA I LOVE IT! keep writing, please update soon!
person HPottersWoman
schedule August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lets see....I'm sorry to say that I read to about chapter 2 and decided to review...although this story has a lot of potential, there could be some improvements...I LOVE the story line, don't change that! It's very original...but...you think you should work on being a litte more discriptive on describing things...there were plenty of times where you jumped into something without explaining it...it got kind of tiresome...i believe I caught a few words that were spelled incorrectly...but not every one is an expert at that (I'm the world worst speller!) If you haven't gotten one already, I suggest that you find a beta to look over everything...with a few changes this fic has some really good potential! Good luck in all that you do!
person pinkwands
schedule August 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*snickers* That Ginny she cracks me up love the dirty little secrets heheh great chapter!

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