Reviews for Blood, Love and Betrayal - Harry Potter

person becka8199

schedule January 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM

I enjoyed it! Good job. Hermione have a quartet of children was a shock, and then twins! Wow. I like that you made Hermione and Harry twins. You always sit with Blaise or Theo. Nice Job! :)

person Anon

schedule November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

person angel

schedule December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM

that was a great endding i love it and i cant wait intill your next story .. in till then later for now and have a merry x-mas.... later for now

angel

person lisa

schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM

Awwww that was sooo beautiful!!!! Loved it. Soo cute to. and yay more lemons . Good chappie. please update again soon.

person Heather

schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM

Okay, normally I don't comment on stories unless I know the author. But this time I couldn't help myself. I like the whole idea for this story, I think you did a good job on the plot. It was a bit confusing sometimes though. Just a few things you might want to fix: you keep changing the children's ages. First they were 3 months, then 1 month then four months all on the *same* page! Then when Draco and Hermione got married they were again 4 months. That's hella confusing. You keep re-spelling the kids names throughout the later chapters. And also....you switched Hermione's middle name twice.

I don't want you to think I didn't like it, but it could be better if you were a bit more consistant in the facts you've thought up. It confuses the reader and sort of makes them not want to continue on.

person lisa