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I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

So, I don't want to be obnoxiously critical, but was this story secretly an exercise in cramming as many euphemisms for genitalia into one piece of smut as possible? Because that's what it looked like. Otherwise, not too bad.

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Why do they all sound like doped up American teens?
That has taken away something from the story IMO.

OMG! I thought Ive already read the smuttiest fanfic on hhr but I was wrong. THIS fic takes the cake! ;-) Its smolderingly smutty and sickeningly likeable, its hard not to ask for a second chapter.... ;-[)

Hey, this was hot....very OOC, but hey, to each his(or her) own.
But seriously the reason I'm replying is THX1138, so it's sad to say I'm giving THX exactly what he/she wants- attention.
Dude, get a fucking life, it's a story in a category, guess what, go into any other category and you'll get crossover from characters, it's not exactly the end of the world, which seems to be what your making it out to be. And by posting all those reviews, guess what your just telling people that this story is SOOO flipping amazing that 199 people reviewed it....you're just making it more popular you dunce. Use that thing sitting on top of your shoulders and get a clue.
The author explained why it's still here AFTER they discovered the threesome/moresome category and it's your antagonazation that's propelling them to keep it here. Had you left well enough alone, then the author probably would have moved it as soon as someone pointed it out. That being said, I totally support it being here in the Hermione/Harry catedory cause it's clearly aHarry Hermione relationship...with a guest...It wouldn't be the first story, it won't be the last, and if you thought about actually giving it a read before judging it you might actually appreciate the characterazation that Draco is given.
So piss off and mind your own damn business...this is a site for people who wish to post creative (if slightly sexual...and this ones more than slightly lol) stories, if you have nothing constructive to say, don't say shit all....
AFH

I think THX is being over the top. If he/she doesn't like the story simply don't read it. In regards to where it's place and their obvious fear of anything with a hint of Draco. It is obvious from the intro that there will be more than H/Hr and although it may be better off in the threesomes category it is pretty easy to get that it will be be H/Hr and Draco. To blatantly harass you is uncalled for and to THX...perhaps you should be a little smarter if you didn't get that it would be more than just H/Hr based on the intro. Not everyone is perfect and postings sometimes end up in the wrong place but you know what...most of us have the courtesy to give them a break.

My apologies, my last comment didn't go through right.

Hermione and Harry with a dash of Draco thrown in

That was definitely MORE than a dash.


I will put a story where I please. I am very much an adult who can make her own decisions.

If this were your site, I'd totally agree with you on that. But it's not. It's only showing your readers common courtesy to post your fic under the right category. Draco doing Hermione is a nasty surprise for most H/Hr shippers. This should go under threesomes, not H/Hr.

As one of the few sites that provides a threesome/moresomes option, it's a shame you don't use it. This is obviously a threesome.