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for Bedtime Story

by Darasu

person Jessia
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice! Very hot.
person meep
schedule September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hot as fuck
person Mizuki
schedule August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Mizuki: I liked it, I really did but it did seem sort of rushed..

Kuma: Yeah, rushed.

Mizuki: Stop interupting! This is the third time tonight rabbit!

Kuma: Sorry...

Mizuki: Anyway, it was sort of rushed but the writing was beautiful in its own way.

Kuma: ...

Mizuki: You can talk now.

Kuma: Oh, right! Well, I liked it too and I mostly liked the parts where Remus was vocal! Anywho... keep up the good work and... Uh, I think that's it.

Mizuki: OK, just walk away now. Just walk away...
person The Miss Marauders
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cute! I did enjoy that...possibly more than I should have...
x Cazzy x