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for Close To Truth

by metafrantic

person antosha
schedule August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah, well done. It builds wonderfully now.

And poor Pansy. Can you imagine being stuck in that kitchen?

;-)
person vicky
schedule August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG, George is jealous, so cute. But please, they will make up, right? Did I tell you I love them as a couple. I hope George confesses his love to her, that would be nice, and really, he has to know that Luna is very honest and literal, which is what makes her one to hold on to, plus she's hot and horny, lol.

The plot thickens ;p

Can't wait for more!!
person jess
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well i just wanted to say i luv ur stories and i can wait to see what else u can cum up w lol well keep up the great stories
one of ur fans
person Antosha
schedule August 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
:does reviewer/h/g/l dance:

:grins:

:-D
person antosha
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You know this, but I love where you're taking this--plottiness, angst and just enough fluff (and sex) to make me smile...
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love the new chapters Ron reciting those laws had me cracking up laughing
person Dorian
schedule August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lol.... Voldemort bad at duelling.. Are you nutts?
The only one who was better than him was Dumbledore, if he ever was better.
And Voldemort doesn't really care about the blood of whoever he kills.
He's just using the prejudice to attract death eaters..
he's a half-blood himself... So it'd make little sense.
person hpf2114
schedule August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great chapter, I have been following you since sixth year. Keep up the good work. loved the last chapter.
person vicky
schedule August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is like the best story ever, though I know every one has said that already, but I thought it needed repeating. The best part being that everyone is getting some action. And I'm glad the focus is on the teenagers, not the adults. But its smut with a very catchy plot, love it.
I haven't read this chapter yet, I'm just too excited to see it and had to review first since I've never left a review before. What really has me going is that on the description it says harry/ginny/luna, you've teased enough and I'm definitely ready for that. Though I hope george/luna continue on, I really like them. I'm writing a george/luna story myself, but it's pg-13, though after your story I think the next one will be adult rated.
That's all, keep it up, hehe.
person Antosha
schedule August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You know, this reads just as, um, well the second time. ;-)