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for CAGED

by roozie

schedule August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can definitely see why it moved you to write this final chapter as I found it very, very touching and wonderful. There were so many simple, but lovely things that felt absolutely unrushed and natural in a comfortable way that I'm once again very amazed about your talent. I will miss this story even with its sweet ending, but I still have "Pandora" and I know you'll continue. Congratulations on this, hon!! It was beautiful beyond words. :)
person Bella Snape
schedule August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was oh, so sweet!!!!!!! I loved the ending, true and everlasting love.
person June
schedule August 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 10 -yay!!! Thanks for telling us what happened when he got out of Azkaban - at the start of the chapter, I was afraid you were going to gloss over that part. Glad they found each other on the bridge and built a new mansion.
person June
schedule August 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 9 - I hope they find Voldy's body in time to save Lucius! You'll kill Fenrir so he can never get out again? Thanks for updating!
person Megan Consoer
schedule August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Holly Kingham
schedule August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter :D Please update soon - can't wait to read more :) Thank you.
schedule August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just saw now that you mentioned me before chapter 4 - you're welcome, hon! I really meant what I said in that review. :)
As for now, well I already dreamt of your story last night, so that tells enough. *lol* Besides, I really, really adore your portrait of the characters you use (even Fenrir, that bastard, is well done!) plus I love your style and the choice of words. Once this story is properly finished, my heart will break, I'm afraid... ;P
person pinkwands
schedule August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*jumps up and down squealing* YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! don't keep us waiting too long for the reunion of LM and HG I cannot wait to read them together, great chappie, so glad Fenrir didn't get a good bite in
person June
schedule August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 8 - naughty cliffhanger! Well, let's hope everyone wakes up in time to catch Fenrir, and that Hermione doesn't start sleepwalking. Thanks for updating!
person Rosewren
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You are now officialy my favorite Lucius Author :D