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August 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Really, really great. I can not say enough so I am going to leave it this: Loved the story!!
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July 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
First time I've actually reviewed anything on aff.net, but this merited it. I applaud your need to have a plot to go with *ahem* adult content... hehe...
PWPs can be wonderful in their own right, but too often when stories are supposed to have plots, it just degrades into an excuse for more smut. Here, you managed an artful romance that is truly charming.
Nitpicky grammar point though... I noticed a number of times when "your" was used where "you're" should have been. The former being the possessive and the later being the contraction of "you are."
All in all? Bravo.
PWPs can be wonderful in their own right, but too often when stories are supposed to have plots, it just degrades into an excuse for more smut. Here, you managed an artful romance that is truly charming.
Nitpicky grammar point though... I noticed a number of times when "your" was used where "you're" should have been. The former being the possessive and the later being the contraction of "you are."
All in all? Bravo.
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October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
And here's me realizing that I sounded like a complete prat in my review.
I was trying to be complimentary, but I just stayed up 'til 0200 to finish reading this lovely fic, so my brain is fried. It really is a splendid story.
I'm sorry I was such a snot...
I'll be on the look out for your other work! (Read: Tomorrow, after I wake back up and have any free time, I'm going to go hunt it down. Yay!)
I was trying to be complimentary, but I just stayed up 'til 0200 to finish reading this lovely fic, so my brain is fried. It really is a splendid story.
I'm sorry I was such a snot...
I'll be on the look out for your other work! (Read: Tomorrow, after I wake back up and have any free time, I'm going to go hunt it down. Yay!)
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September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey that was so awesome but uh WHY IS EVERYONE always sayin like pussy or cock or somethin? Come on. This is romance. Use romantic language. "Womanhood...maidenhead..manhood..." something intriguing and desirable...not...pornographic.
BUT THAT WAS AN EXCELLENT STORY!!!!!!
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!
BUT THAT WAS AN EXCELLENT STORY!!!!!!
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!
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September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh and when i was reading that part about them running on the bridge towards each other i just started thinkin about that song by Aerosmith "I Don't Wanna Miss A Thing"
don't know why. just a thought...
don't know why. just a thought...
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September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow - wonderful ending. I really loved this fic - thank you for an amazing read :D
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September 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was an absolutely beautiful story!
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August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aaaaaaaaaaaw, that was the sweetest thing ever (without being disgustingly sweet)
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August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well what can I say about this story... I sobbed my little heart out in your last chapter it was beautiful when they ran towards each other on the bridge *sniffle* hehe I sincerely hope you write some more Lucius :D