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for Shattered hearts and broken paths

by Magzie

person lisa
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awww that was a nice chappie. You can see Severus' softer side. And wow she can learn wandless magic and metamorph which would be great. Now Voldermort knows. Poor Hermione she's so stubborn like her Dad. They both need to watch out. Cant wait for more. more please. Please Update soon.
person Lady Lynn
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn straight keep your storyline, I enjoy it immensely. Update soon!
person serenamarie
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow I love this keep going i am dying to know more about her mom
person Miya Sparrow
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love it! keep going please! I love these kinda stories!
person Lady Lynn
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Definately getting interesting, but I was wondering... how do you pronounce evilynn? I could be so completely off base on either, but im torn between thinking evil lynn or evelyn.
person Boondock Saint
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hermione would never ever fraternize with Draco Malfoy. And she would kill herself before she would fuck with him. You should reconsider your storyline.
person lisa
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my I didn't expect Severus to be her father. Wow Poor Hermione. 17 yrs of lies. And Draco is actually human in this one. which is reallly nice. and I wonder is Severus Draco's godfather in this? just wondering. Good chappie. Love it can't wait for more. rl calls unfortunately and it has priority first. Please update when you can. hopefully soon. I really like this story.
person lisa
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good start and all. I love it. more more more please. I am sooo curious who Evilyn really is and as to what the letter to Hermione is about and why Tonks never informed the others of the letter. I mean that is a big clue and could contain the info poor Severus needs. and I wonder if he realizes he has been made now that his woman was taken. Just a few wonderings. I can't wait til you update again Please update soon.
person Lady Lynn
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Magzie, love, it's fantastic! I am definately looking forward to reading more of this story. Good luck!
person madridcc
schedule October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
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