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by charmedphoenix

person Mercyds
schedule April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*giggles* This is one of the cutest stories I've ever read!!! Do keep going with it, its fantastic!!!
Asyen
person roxierose13
schedule August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hmm, well you have a double chapter back there, but otherwise... this is interesting! Didn't know it was a crossover till I started reading. Chris sounds a lot like Harry there... anyway, I love Chris :) I wish I could orb. Anyway, this is interesting. :)
person College Chick
schedule August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
One tiny problem-I got the impression from reading this fic that Chris was your own original character. You should specify that you're writing a crossover because there's no guarentee that your readers have all watched Charmed and give credit to the people who created Chris.
person koryuu
schedule August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Its good so far, I like both Charmed and Harry Potter so good crossover XD. Chapter 3 is repeated though...I don't know if anyone told you or not...Can't wait for you to update!