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for The Bottom Of Black

by absumoaevum

person Jeni
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*eye twitches*
person Hanna Delacour
schedule August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dammit just kill the bastard! I hate to think of him coming back and destroying our girl even more! And what is up with Snape? Too curious... looking forward to your next!
person Malinda
schedule August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Don't worry about the low number of reviews cause it seems to be that not many people do them on this site. Also, a beta is like an editor/proof-reader/critiquer (not a word, sorry). They polish up each chapter, correct any mistakes (spelling, grammar, punctuation, etc.)and even offer helpful bits of advice. Some people get upset if a chapter isn't flawless, but I think you're doing a fine job :)
person firewall
schedule August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That chapter was freaking cool!!!! Can't wait for 4.
person firewall
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your second chapter has continued the high quality of the first one. Poor Hermione, but I also think poor Draco. Hmmm, now Snape is entering the picture. Let's see how it goes.
person Moonstar
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A bit on the dark side, but I'm finding myself more and more intrigued as to what will happen.

Keep up the good work!
person pinkwands
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow great chapter! snape saved her! YAY!!!! can't wait for an update! :)
person r4
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good background story and character development. i'd like to see where this goes.
person Luthien
schedule August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
MORE!
Gods, more!
I love really Gothic fics and I think yours definitely has potential... please don't drop it... I'm so into DM/HG-fics, it's unreal, but I love picturing Draco as the good guy and rescuing Hermione...
Keep it up, please!
If you need a beta, I'll be more than happy... ;)
person DA4life
schedule August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i think its a great start...i'm curious on where u plan to take this though so update soon plz