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This is horrible, names r misspelled, words are used wrong and its so fucking short, y did u even bother posting it. That is literally the shortest chapter of a story I ever read. Its like a snippet almost short enough for the summary. U should take it down until its finished some more. Please though do work on it, there is a shortage of Honks fics on here.

indeed he was lucky

That's an awfully short start. Can't even get a real feel for the story. Make your chapters longer and post often. Hope you repost a longer introductory chapter.

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?