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for Shiver

by Chandrima

person momoko
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good chapter, I like it
why not both
person Danny
schedule September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
VAMPIRE FOR SURE THERE COOLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!
person bleh
schedule September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
MAKE HIM A VAMPIRE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person evi
schedule September 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think that both of them are great, but i prefer vampire, for the blood lust and the rest...
person hrfreak31
schedule September 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i think harry should be a vampire. i think he'd be good as one.
person Lace
schedule September 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Vampire. Severus is an Incubus-Dark Veela, and Layla is a Light Veela, so I want a vampire. It makes things hotter. :D
person Anon
schedule September 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Vampire.
person Anon
schedule September 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
VAMPIRE!!! Definitely: Harry sucking his mates' necks every now and then would be lovely... XD

Good chapters; loved it!
person Kyriss
schedule September 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Incubus! Harry will need the stamina to keep up with Severus & Layla. Its also a way to 'power up' Harry w/out making him continuously strong.

Just my opinion. Great story btw, I'm enjoying it immensely
person Jet
schedule September 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Both you could escuse it by his power level and one mate for each like sev. Still love can't wait for more.........Jet