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August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story has alot of potential but the numerous spelling errors detract from it. Ex: He was circulating her body ...where we was spreading it around? Plot inconsistencies also make it difficult to read...she's chained up but he had her undressing him...quite the feat. I would love it see this fixed up it would make for quite the enjoyable read.
schedule
August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
man .. i hope severus can get to her ... please please please update soon .. later for now
angel
angel
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August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'd rather her be with Severus, and soon. Oh, I also like what you've done so far.
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August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ah so that is how lucius is still alive .. please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now
angel
angel
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August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
man ... i hope snape can get what he wants.. and im glad harry did not go crazy on snape when he told him about hermione .... please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now
angel
angel
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August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOL! love you too champion! *giggles* great chapter, good to see Harry is still a prat hehe and gotta love Sev for protecting HG :D
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August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
~lol~ that was great ... please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now
angel
angel
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August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ohhh what a sweetheart! the best he's ever had! lol beautiful!! you are doing so well with this story :D
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August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
two knicker changes LOL! that was so hot! with the strawberries and the hair washing *swooon* hmmm don't be naughty with the tricking with "Lucius is Dead" lol I almost cried when I read that heheh love how Sev has taken over Malfoy mansion though hehe that is hilarious!