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for A Tale of Two Wizards

by Rumpelyssa

person Anon
schedule August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and I love Lucius, but I feel sooo bad for Snape! Don't make him lose Hermione, please!
person angel
schedule August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
man .. will harry tell snape about what just happen ... please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel
person pinkwands
schedule August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sorry for my lack of reviews! :D hehe I was away on holidays! now back to the story I'm reviewing on chapter six hehe because I need to tell you my thoughts!! soooo fabulous so far! love the Lucius Plot bunny *giggles* he is always good for a nice blonde distraction *cough* haha

ohh sooo sweet sev loves her and she had morning regrets about Lucius! :D love the way this is going...will review after I get to the end of the last updated
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person pinkwands
schedule August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
chapter seven.. OMG LORD VOLDEMORT! LOL geez woman you are chucking in those bunnies!! love it!! mwahah love how the weasleys keep interupting Harrys uhhh intimate time with Ginny hehe
chapter eight...*sobs* ohhh my god that was intense!! I was bawling..my husband goes to me "what are you crying over" and when I told him he snorted and rolled his eyes..pfft men just don't understand!!!

chapter nine...OMG DARK LORD SEX EWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW LOL! that is all I have to say *giggles* hehe

chapter ten :D ohhh you know I love Lucius but I am rooting for Severus in this story... if only she knew the trouble he was going to, to save her!! :D

wow I have had fun reviewing and catching up :D more please? :D
person angel
schedule August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
man .. poor mione .. i hope sev get there soon then she dose not have to marry him ... please please please please please update soon .. later for now

angel
person Megan Consoer
schedule August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person angel
schedule August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
man .. poor mione .. please sev you need to get to her quikly .... and mione just keep on trying to remember him .... please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel
person Megan Consoer
schedule August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Anon
schedule August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You have potential as a writer but you need some work on characterization and your overuse of exclamation points.
person angel
schedule August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was heartbreaking ... please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel