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No, I don't think she made the siuation worse for herself; how could Snape ever be worse or a bad thing? lolol

And a long story with LV/HG would be wicked!

i hope he dose not come for her in till after she is done with sev .. please please please please upate soon i would love to read more ...later for now

angel

I am really enjoying this story, but a word of warning! If Severus dosen't win Hermione away from Lucius. you're in big trouble! LOL. There are a few spelling mistakes that you should be aware of. 1) the word is sonata and 2) you use the word "weren't" incorrectly quite frequently, the correct grammar is "wasn't". Other than that the writting is quite good and I'm looking forward to see how the rivalry plays out. Can't wait for the next update. Toodles.

man... please please please more ... later for now

angel

Another great chapter. Not exactly a warm welcome by Bellatrix, I hope Hermione has her wand and watches her back, and Draco is going to go batshit. The next chapter should be fun, Lol. Anyway I am British and although I don't claim to be a grammar expert (just a grammar nazi, lol) weren't and wasn't are contractions for were not and was not, and while both are perfectly acceptable words, I have found for some reason spell checks don't like contractions. Anyway the general rule is (and there are exceptions to every rule) that while both are past tense, "weren't" is generally plural and "wasn't" is singular. For example "she wasn't home" "they weren't home". I come from a long line of English teachers and this is the result of growing up and having your grammar corrected BEFORE you even said anything. Anyway I really do love this story and can't wait for the next chapter. BTW if Lucius wins and I have Severus. LOL. Toodles.

I meant CAN I have Severus. It's my keyboards fault. LOL. Toodles again.

ohhh Lucius *swoooooon* heheh yes darling I think you should do a Pwp and a plot story with LV or Tom Riddle or maybe both together a nice story with abit of dirty smut heheh I also adore stories where HG gets turned to the dark side with Lucius influence hehe I have a few bookmarked if you want the URL's email me :D
anyway back to the chapter hehe can't wait to read about Dracos reaction hehe poor old Sev abit of a sap but I love your take on him anyway hehe well done!! :D

ok I will admit it *sigh* I love abit of smutty voldie/tom/hermione I am a deviant I submit to your smut! lol

great two chapters...how is a girl supposed to choose between these two gorgeous men?
hmm I know this story is far from over but for your next one a voldie/hg one? *cough* ok I'm off hehe

wow that was great .... poor harry i hope he does try harder to get along with snape .. and how will snape win mione back ... please please please update soon.... ohhh and that was cute to her what your sister said ... later for now

angel