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I just have 1 question. Why did Snape take her to the dungeons when they both knew she was to learn the Wolfsbane potion?

I have enjoyed the story. As I have never been torn between two people, I cannot understand any of her feelings. I just see her as kind of weak, whether or not she really was. I really hope there is a sequel.

I think that I would have had to say something if Lucius told the one person there that I trusted to leave me alone with him. And I think that she should be more than a little aggravated with Severus for leaving her of his own free will...no matter how Lucius made him feel. Especially when he just told Snape that he basically killed Narcissa. ick! and it is too bad because Lucius is so hunky, but I don't like to see SS suffer when it is so obvious how much he loves HG. p

You can certainly tell that the lack maturity of the girls impacts their behavior. Still cannot believe that Ginny left HG after she told her that she thought she had seen something in the fireplace. That should have been a clue to tell an adult...NOT leave her alone when she really could not defend herself.
I tried to find and email address for you because I hate when someone corrects what an author does, but you do not list one. Since this is the only way to contact you, I wanted to share something with you that is a glaring error. You are so careful and your stories are so enjoyable that I know that you would want to make the necessary adjustments. It is your use of weren't/were, which is to be used with plural, such as "they were, we were,etc." while wasn't/was is for singular, such as "I was, he was, she wasn't, etc." Again, I am sorry to put this here, but you are so careful that I feel that you would want to make this right.
Sorry about your health problems (in the same boat), and am happy that writing is a stress relief for you. Thanks for sharing it with us. p

Boy, Hermione brings new meaning to the word 'ho. Whoever she marries better not have a job that takes them out of town EVER or they will come home to her either in bed or having been in bed with someone else. She is NOT showing her smarts, is she? Nice twist with moaning Myrtle. p

Very good! Hermione was making me nervous with her wishy washy self. I only wish that in one story she would not say that her body was betraying her while she is being beaten and tell whoever is doing it that it is a bodily function and is not necessarily tied to enjoyment or want. And it is amazing to me that they think that it does not matter if her emotion driven side is mortified (which could surely come in between those concerned)...not to be confused with the kinky Hermione who gets off on it all once she experiences it. Your characters were great, especially Severus, Molly, Remus and Arthur. Loved it as I have loved all of your stories so far. Thanks for sharing your stories. p

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

This was an excellent story. I am glad that Hermione ended up with Severus and is having his child. I think if you do a sequel it would be nice to see what happens after the baby is born. You could also write that Lucius escapes from Azkaban and tries to go after Hermione.

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

interesting story enjoyed it