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Nina, I can

I'm so confused. What happened to the part of the chapter where they had sex? Did you not write that?

this is such a really cool story!!!! I've just finished reading the last chapter and I can't wait to see what's gonna happen. Though I'm not really into the really romantic stories yours definately makes the exception. keep on writing!!!

Good for Ginny! Why should she listen to Harry? She's only a year younger and does have a personal score to settle with Voldemort for using her as a first year.

Concerning chapter two, I'm starting to wonder if Ron has been drugged. That whole bit at Gringotts was confusing, or maybe I'm just an idiot?

Nina, I completely agree with you

This chapter is completely out of character for Hermione

But not Draco because when would he ever turn getting some down : )

I think it was wayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy to early for this to happen

I though he was going to get a thank you kiss off Hermione, then she would go back to being shy around him and he would continue chasing her in this chapter

Then in the next chapter he would corner her and get some more kisses

Then in the next chapter a few more kisses

But basically step-by-step

Not just her jumping into bed with him

And the sex scene was too technical it wasn

Wow~!! Great story...Read all chapters in one go..Brilliant..Just continue.
I love the plot line.

please update soon, i like how you explained Draco's past cruelty to hermione, i'm enjoying this story and i can't wait to read the next chapter

Wow. Poor Hermione. I am surprised he didnt touch her. and Poor boys. locked away and unable to escape. Tonks was just doing what was best. they could get killed. I hope they understand but apparently not. And woot woot. Draco. He's so awesome. He waltzed in, saved Hermione and in the end Hermione bested Lucius . He should really love that when he comes round. Unless he comes round before they get to him. Ohh dear, I fear an escape. maybe mabye not. Cant wait to see!!! More more more please. Please upate soon.

FANTASTIC chapter Nina!

I can't wait to read more so UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!

Love TiffANY : )

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