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August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great job!!! Please continue.
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August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this chapter. Those boys are so possessive. UPdate if you can.
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August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I do love this story! This chapter was great! I can't wait to see what Dad has to say. lol
Can't wait for the rest. You are doing fantastic!!!!
Can't wait for the rest. You are doing fantastic!!!!
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August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O god im tired, this is a blody great, no fantastic story, unfortunatly I found it a rather late hour and have spent a good part of the night glued to the computer. I dont know wether I should be estatic Iv found such a supurb story or be sleepy and grumpy that Iv stayed up so late reading.
I think Im going to go to sleep now but I look forward to reading the next chapter/smut sceen for this story so plz update soon.
I think Im going to go to sleep now but I look forward to reading the next chapter/smut sceen for this story so plz update soon.
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August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hehe keeps getting better and better! And don't worry, chapter 12 turned out GREAT! Really Good.
Keep surprising us ;)
Keep surprising us ;)
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August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What a great chapter! I loved Hermione's speech, and she even got the Slitherins' to change their view! That's some pretty crafty convincing going on, with mentioning their future kids and all! I'm still a bit confused with the Malfoy owl - I missed Blaise and Draco's response and the owl's trip back home, since it shows up again attacking Hermione. But hey, then as punishment it stays stupefied in the room while they all leave! Wonder if the elves will move him like so much baggage into the Head Boy room! I'm looking forward to Luscius' response so much now that the boys will join the order! Will Luscius join too and turn spy in order to protect his only son, or will Draco be disowned? I'm guessing the latest missive from Malfoy mannor will bring him over to the school - can't wait to read the next chapter!
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August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
first off have to say I'm loving this so much. i love veela fic, and a rapidly updating, trio veela fic? I'm in frickin heaven.
But since you're not sure where you're taking this, can I make a few suggestions? I've noticed a lot of rooting for hermione in the reviews. I completely agree that Hermione (the Hermione you've created, not just talking canon) would never be able to function in a Master/slave relationship, even if she likes it in the bedroom (that would actually make sense b/c soem people who have the lots of responsiblity in their lives like to give up control in the bedroom). But Hermione would never been able to sit back and let two men make all the pertinant decisions for her life. They may want to keep her safe, they make treat her well, they may feel they know what is best for her but that is how you treat a child... it's how you love a pet not a woman. Plus I wouldn't think it would work for Blaise and Draco unlitmately either. Do they really want Hermione to be either miserable about the decisions they make for her or a simpering little kitten that needs to ask their permission to breath deeply? That wouldn't be Hermione, which would raise the question, what was it about her that made her destined to be their mate? Is it just a phyical, chemical thing that requires nothing deeper. If they really loved her, they wouldn't strip her of her free will- that would strip her of every bit of respect she'd worked so hard to earn since she got to Hogwarts, not to mension all of her self-respect. She would, what? Be in a lust-induced trance whenever they were close enough to smell and hate herself every time they weren't? If Hermione were to loose her autonomy, she'd loose herself... and then all Blaise and Draco would have is a shell to fuck. Am I wrong? Like I said, so problem whatsoever with some D/s in the bedroom. That is hot, I have to say. But D/s in real life is degrading and humiliating unless it's completely voluntary and let's face it- D and B exploited a very real chemical advantage. That's not frickin fair lol. Sorry that this story has got me so wound up but since you kept saying you're just writing without a roadmap I thought I give you some input. I've become rather attached to this and your Hermione.
But since you're not sure where you're taking this, can I make a few suggestions? I've noticed a lot of rooting for hermione in the reviews. I completely agree that Hermione (the Hermione you've created, not just talking canon) would never be able to function in a Master/slave relationship, even if she likes it in the bedroom (that would actually make sense b/c soem people who have the lots of responsiblity in their lives like to give up control in the bedroom). But Hermione would never been able to sit back and let two men make all the pertinant decisions for her life. They may want to keep her safe, they make treat her well, they may feel they know what is best for her but that is how you treat a child... it's how you love a pet not a woman. Plus I wouldn't think it would work for Blaise and Draco unlitmately either. Do they really want Hermione to be either miserable about the decisions they make for her or a simpering little kitten that needs to ask their permission to breath deeply? That wouldn't be Hermione, which would raise the question, what was it about her that made her destined to be their mate? Is it just a phyical, chemical thing that requires nothing deeper. If they really loved her, they wouldn't strip her of her free will- that would strip her of every bit of respect she'd worked so hard to earn since she got to Hogwarts, not to mension all of her self-respect. She would, what? Be in a lust-induced trance whenever they were close enough to smell and hate herself every time they weren't? If Hermione were to loose her autonomy, she'd loose herself... and then all Blaise and Draco would have is a shell to fuck. Am I wrong? Like I said, so problem whatsoever with some D/s in the bedroom. That is hot, I have to say. But D/s in real life is degrading and humiliating unless it's completely voluntary and let's face it- D and B exploited a very real chemical advantage. That's not frickin fair lol. Sorry that this story has got me so wound up but since you kept saying you're just writing without a roadmap I thought I give you some input. I've become rather attached to this and your Hermione.
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August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi. I totally loved your story. I LOVE Veela Draco as Hermione as his mate, and throwing Blaize in would make anyone topple over. I wish there was still an option where one can put a `fic into a favorite catagory, but oh well. Please continue soon.
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August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I knew she would be able to make them see it her way... Add soon
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August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
thehehh that made me feel all warm and tingly inside.. made me soo soo happpy!... hahhaha...i love how the boys are whipped by Hermione... they had every intention of not letting her be a part of the war, one Hermione starts talking, they agree, well comprimised.... atleast Harry and Dumbledore hinted at that... Well keep up the great work .. can't wat for more!