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for Claim for Life

by firedragonsjewel

person Anon
schedule August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
How many pages! Wow - and we've been reading it update by update every day! This is such a great story that its bittersweet to see you thinking about ending it, but we have confidence you'll pull it off brilliantly as you've done with every chapter! We'd love to know more about Lucius' thoughts on the triad - we keep hoping that he sees the error of his ways (so to speak) and becomes a spy alongside Severus. That way, with a triad and two inner circle Death Eaters on their side, the Light can really send Voldemort packing forever! What a reviewer said earlier about the end is true - we'd love to read something of how you see the future working out for the triad even if there is no need to detail the Final Battle if you don't feel like it. In particular, we'd love to see Hermione's parents reaction to the situation their one and only little girl is now in (hah! that'd be some shock!), as well as the two Slytherins trying to survive in the muggle world. For now though we'll hold our breath and look forward to seeing how the Slytherins deal with Hermione kicking them out of the room for girl talk, and with her disobedience earlier! Thank you now and always for writing such a fun, engaging, emotional, compelling, exciting, and overall awesome story!
person Lexy
schedule August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY! Another update. Gah, I can't wait till the next!
person quatz
schedule August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it may be longer than you had orginally intended but I'm enjoying. You are not simming over things and staying true to the story line.
person Bobbi
schedule August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i really love this story. It's well written and stays moderetly true to charictor. I've always loved the three of them together, in my opinion there isn't enough stories with this triad.
person Orion T
schedule August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, it's amazing.

Can't wait for an update.

OT
person DaniD
schedule August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hate to see such a wonderful story end..but believe me, I FULLY APPRECIATE the fact that you are trying not to abandon this..So thank you for your honesty. Just give it some conclusion..with an impression of what the future holds for this trio..I'd be a happy girl ; D
person Pastel
schedule August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, Hermione is going to get punished. Blaise and Draco seemed so incline not to leave her alone, yet they did anyway. Update.
person angel
schedule August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was great .. hmm what is going to happen to lucius ... i cant wait in till the next update... in till then later for now and good luck with you script... later

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person firewall
schedule August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cassandra, thank you. That's for the new chapter and also that you will finish this off in a way that gives us all, you included, some closure.

Now that was very interesting. Lucius was his usual manipulating self..lucky that Harry is so closely in tune with Hermione. This could prove an interesting asset.

So are you thinking another couple of chapters? Looking forward to the next one.
person cherie
schedule August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh this is getting good. What will happen when Lucius wakes up! Kee going, it is great!!