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for Claim for Life

by firedragonsjewel

person DaniD
schedule August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeah!! Now that is the strong female character that we all know and love. : D So glad that the "boys" are forced to see that Hermione will NOT be reduced to a human sex slave. *sigh* Thanks for this great story..you have done a wonderful job!
person cherie
schedule August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this chapter. It was great! You are doing so well with this story.
person angel
schedule August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
now they belive harry ... and poor draco he dose not like the sex ban the mione put up ... please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

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person Shardae
schedule August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I dont know why they thought Hermonie would juss let them run all over her....
person Kat
schedule August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love how strong you make Hermione! Much better than most fics
person firewall
schedule August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You have to do what you have to do but Cassandra, you need to know that we will miss you and especially this story. There are a couple of Veela stories that I have followed over the years and I enjoy reading the genre. Your story in particular has to be one of the very best triad stories and one of the very best Veela stories I have read. I hope when you bring it to a close you do so in a way that will bring closure to your readers. So are you thinking one more chapter?

I'm sure Donovan would be pleased to read this chapter as it addresses the N/C sex aspect which was an issue.

If by chance, you aren't able to read any more of our reviews, I just wanted to thank you for sharing with us this awesome story. Good luck in the future.
person RandH4ever
schedule August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love the plot so far...but you need to get a beta. (You have mis-spelled "Quidditch" several times). If you want help, e-mail me at kirsten56@lycos.com.
person zoe
schedule August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice chapter very funny, im looking forward to the dual seduction so write again soon plz
person amoraluv
schedule August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is really cute
keep writing and go to spellcheck.net or something for the miss spelled words, but other then that its a really cute story
person Hanna Delacour
schedule August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter... sorry to hear that the fic is going to end up shorter, but I'm sure it will be wonderful anyways. Good luck in all you do!