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August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lovely chapter as usual! Your writing is such a treat - better than Godiva chocolates! I have a couple of questions that I hope you can clarify for us in later chapters: why was Ron overdoing it with the dream drugs? and why is Hermione taking for granted her mates? I understand that they have no choice but to be with her, but she's overstepping the boundaries by offering the triad up as bait in my view - perhaps it'll be clearer later? Is it her desperation to get the war over with that's prompting her to volunteer for such drastic measures?
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August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
thank you for the update! thank you! thank you! thank you! I loved it! Your story is so well written in terms of prose, style and story arc than many of the others posted! It is one of - if not THE - best Veela fics out there! So romantic and fast-paced! I'd love to read more about Lucius and Narcissa, and Hermione's parents reactions to the triad situation, and do think that your Hermione is very much in-character. I don't know though if she'll be able to keep running away every time she's upset at her mates like she did over the pregnancy issue.
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August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was great ... i hope mione can get them to compromise ... please please update soon i would love to read more .. late for now
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August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You stunned me when you said that there were going to be at least 4 more chapters. I had reconcilled myself to one more max. As I was reading, I was trying to think how you could finish the story up in this chapter. LOL You completely fooled me. For goodness sake, don't apologize because you are busy. We'll take what you give us when you give it as long as you finish it for us.
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August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
brilent chapter, I cant wait for the next one
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August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Pleased that Hermionie regained her mind. Glad to see her speak out and I'm loving the triad and the story idea and execution.
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August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good chapter. it deals with all the consequences of their behavior and drives the friends vs lovers relationships. i think you're giving teenages more credit than they deserve in their ability to accept the situation, but that's ok. draco is dead-on and i like the description of why he acts the way he does. i hope you update very soon.
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August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I thought it was a cute chapter and very well done. Can't wait to rea dmore.
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August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great two chappies!! I was hoping HG was stand up to the two veelas and she did!!! :D also glad that Blaise shows how much he loves her by caving in hehe and Draco always the spoiled child:D
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August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, those boys sure know how to find loopholes in an ultimatum. Nice story.