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August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was hot, it really was... but please please please... if you're not sure where you're taking this yet, please consider figuring a way for hermione to get an equal footing. i just have bad feelings about what would hapen the first time her head clears and she realizes that she's given them absolute control over her life. hermione granger doesn't defer to anyone lol. well, regardless, I 'm loving this and can't wait to read more!
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August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh the smut was very well written. Not too bad, some authors go a little to far but yours was perfect. Can't wait for the next chapter, I hope to read it very soon.
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August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You really need a way so Hermione comes up with a way to be a partner rathter than a slave to them. I can't see Hermione submiting to anyone. And just how is she going to get them to help her in Order matters. There is no way Hermione would ever just sit behind and wait for the war to end. She would want to be a part of it.
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August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I Love this story, please keep it up!
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August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was great .... i love it ... please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now
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August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lovely work, just the right mix.
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August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. It's great.
You need to credit Zephyr for the tattoo thing though. It's from her story Be Careful What You Wish.
You need to credit Zephyr for the tattoo thing though. It's from her story Be Careful What You Wish.
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August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sooooooo hot thast rocked man!
i cant wiat for more!!
it was so hot that she submited though that will make it perfect!
i cant wiat for more!!
it was so hot that she submited though that will make it perfect!
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August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is such a sensual story but doesn't end up being a PWP fic. Excellent chracters and even better sex scenes.
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August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, that was freaking hot!!! I have a little problem with the "obey" part but then I did with my own wedding vows (he's still waiting to hear them) and hell will freeze over before he hears "Master". LOL I imagine that "obey" is going to cause a bit of a problem with Hermione's involvement in the Order. I expect a few fireworks then.