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for Claim for Life

by firedragonsjewel

person Sapphire
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I still love your story!!!!!!! And you are a quick updater!!! Lolz; that's a good thing!!! Keep updating, please!
person DaniD
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was WONDERFUL! You managed to lay to rest any concerns I had about Hermione's character..In this chapter, she proved her metal..and earned a bit of respect from her mates. Also, having Draco become head boy to replace Anthony was a stroke of genius ; )

Hmm..I wonder what Lucius will have to say about Draco's new status as a Veela..and who his mates for life are? Will he try to manipulate and use them with their new powers, or will he try to kill them? Also, looking forward to seeing if Hermione has become pregnant. If she does, it will create quite a bit of angst with the war looming, and everyone else's views on their unconventional relationship. Once again, GREAT chapter!
person angel
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that weas great i love how she handle the boys ... and yea draco is the new head boy ... please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel
person magiknight
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you had Hermione stand up to them this chapter! So far you had kept her strong willed and believable but chapter 12 had me a bit worried. I can't wait until she shows them her place again.
person Anon
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very hot! I love it!
person cherie
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YES!!!!!!!!! Oh baby, YES! I loved this chapter. But then again, I have loved every chapter so far. lol
So I guess I am just in love with the story. Can't wait to see what happenes. (still holding breath) lol
person cherie
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! Chapter was great. And I still hope she can get a little more control. Like staying in the Order? (hint hint)..lol..can't wait for the rest.
person lizzy
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
im lovin so far im so glad that they finally got together i was hopin ghtat nothig bad was gonna happen..... whats gonna happen with the situation of the up coming war
person chaz
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that story was so good . update soon!!!!!
person serenamarie06
schedule August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YEAHHHHH ok so that rocked I love how you threw a defiant hermione in there but in the end she was unable to turn away from them although I do not know how I feel about the master stuff but I sorta like it? hmmm anyway fantastic chapter can not wait for the next.....