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for The Slave

by irishfairietale

person MistressOfDarkness
schedule July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
update soon
schedule May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It
person Carmen
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*muahaha* I'm lovin' it! *grins sadistically* even tho i hate pedo and vernon, this story is really interesting! Plz update soon ^^
person Nekosune
schedule December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Wonderful! ^_^ Cookies and pocky for you, update soon for yamyams!
person inyashanut
schedule August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ow my gosh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
pls pls pls update soon
person doesitmatter
schedule August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow.
good story
update soon.
person emma
schedule August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey, this sounds like its going to be a great story i hope you update again soon
person Incessant_Darkness
schedule July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that so sick and twisted and horribly wrong. How could you? Now before you think I'm flaming I'll move on to the praise. That's a wonderful setup for angst, child abuse always prooves well for the future of the plot line when done properly and from what I've read I can tell that this fic will turn out very well. You have a couple small grammer mistakes but I do that too, just typing so fast that I end up leaving out a word or leaving off endings so I'm not holding it against you. Other than that this is an amazing fic and I hope to see more of it in the future. Hopefully you will keep the updates fast and just as wonderful. Keep up the great work and update soon.

- Incessant_Darkness
person Anon
schedule July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please continue... I want to know if things get better for Harry...
person momoko
schedule July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
poor harry