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for Hold Me Close

by writtenwithapensealedwithakiss

schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just found your story and I am really enjoying it.I really hope that you continue it.I look forwar to reading more of this when it comes out.
person Citten
schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well as always thanks for the chapter and i really liked it, boy lavander really has an attitude problem! as always it problely is important to the story as i also know the part with ron will be and thank you before hand for sparing me THAT image! well until next time! :)
person Jennifer
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE do not let Ron snog Hermione! I know he will be hurt when she tells him, but I hope that (for a change) he can be somewhat mature about the whole thing instead of the total prat that he is often portrayed as. Update soon! P.S. Can you explain to this idiot what lemon and lime are? Not the fruits, either.
schedule October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! :D
person angel
schedule October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awww that was sweet .... please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .... later for now

angel
person lisa
schedule October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yes i really like this and hope you will continue to write more. there's not many Severus/Hermione that start out with her already pregnant.at least not many that i have seen lol I could be blind though. it's interesting though. and I love how Severus seems to just really love her but she seems more torn between the two. hope she makes a choice soon. Poor Sevrus. It would be hard to watch your significant other having a sham relationship with someone you despise.so anyways keep up the good work and goodluck. Please update soon.
person Jennifer
schedule September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well done! Can't wait for the next chapter.
person lisa
schedule September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice chappie. a tender moment for Severus and Hermione. I cannot wait to see what happens next. and I cannot wait to see how Minerva takes it. hopefully everything will be cleared up and Severus will remain safe. anyways Goodluck an kepp up the good work.
schedule September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter, awaiting the next.
person angel
schedule September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was great .. i hope ron does keep it a secret... please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel