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for Hold Me Close

by writtenwithapensealedwithakiss

person septentrion
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ch13: that's where we can see how weak and immature Hermione is. The more she remains quiet, the more people will be hurt. And will Ron notice something with her belly?
person PAMELA WILLIAMS
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great post, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks.
person Anon
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"Hermione was lost for words as he took her, not really knowing what to do or say, or even think." ooooooo I know! She could STOP him, say that she had something important to say, that couldn't wait, and then she should think of a way to let him know she's with Snape and Snape Jr is on the way. LOL I'm so glad you are back! I've been checking this story every day for updates. Today was my lucky day. I love this fic and I can't wait to see where it goes.
-Loyal Fan
person angel
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
man she should have stoped him and told him ...please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please udpate soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter! I hope Hermione tells rons next chapter. :)
person Megan Consoer
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person angel
schedule October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
man ... that was just mean to say ... hmm hope mione can stay way from ron or she can just tell him to piss off .. please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .... later for now

angel
schedule October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter! :D
person lisa
schedule October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awww Svereus does love her. and I cannot wait to see what happens in Godrics Hollow and am waiting for more. I really hope she escapes Ron's clucthes or if she dont hopefully Severus wont find out.
person Amanda
schedule October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you should update soon, and frequently, i like it and have nothing better to do than read stories........and i like to read........so you should update:)




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