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for Hold Me Close

by writtenwithapensealedwithakiss

person Apryl
schedule November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad I wasn't the only one to see the Hitler/Voldemort connection. But I didn't see the ancestry angle so much as using fear to keep his followers loyal. It's amazing the things people will do to keep from having those same things done to them. In chapter 13 Ron offers to have his mum make up some pink potion for hermione. What's it for?...PMS? Desperately awaiting updates 8D
person Tana
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, it sucked me in, and I could not get enough, I hope you write more soon., but I'll wait because great stories like this take time.

Tana
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OOO! I hope Severus isnt too mad at hermione for sleeping with ron. I cannot wait to see what happens next! :)
person angel
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
man .. poor mione im glad harry is there to help her out ... please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel
person Ava Allen
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is greate story!!! I love it. I have hope for a happy end for Severus and Hermione. And for Ron too. Maybe he can find somebody, who can love him.
person anya
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, come on! That's horrible. For everyone to think Severus's baby is Weasley's. Please tell me you have a happily-ever-after for Severus and Hermione in the offing?!
person Barbara
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Severus, finding out that his love slept with that Weasley. Why would Hermione be so upset when the ring was exposed I mean she has a man with Severus and a child on the way and Weasley is such a boy. UPdate soon.
person takemeaway
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank you all for your Reviews! Makes my muse happy.

Barbara: I think she is upset because of the way he is finding things out. She does care about him, he is one of her best friends, and to see him keep getting hurt this way is hurting her. She knew she was going to hurt him, but didn't expect it to come out like this.

Sorceress: Not to worry, there will definitely be a conversation about Severus' feelings about what Hermione did.


Anya and Ava: Thank you both so much for your kind words, and I don't want to give away anything, so I will just remind you that the cover is only necessary whilst Voldemort is still alive. When (if) he is destroyed, it will no longer be necessary for the ruse.


Emmy: Thank you for your support both here, and at myspace, means a lot to me!


Tana: The fact that you are by no means a Harry Potter fan, and that I had to explain countless things about the HP world to you, but you still loved my story means more than I could ever express. I hope I don't disappoint...
person Citten
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
bummer. that baseistly explains it all thank you. great last few chapters i just have been out of the loop the last little while and well what can i say, here is the review now, sorry it took so long.
person lisa
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WHEW!!!! i was biting nails there for a second. Thank god Hermione and the baby is ok. and I am glad to see you portray Harry with such matureness. Poor Ron he's heartbroken. and ohhhh dear is it going to be hard to pretend with him now that he knows. I dont think he'll agree. And I am wondering if Severus will take Hermione to task about sleeping with Ron? I hope things work for Severus and Hermione. He deserves happiness. More more more please Update soon please.