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for Hold Me Close

by writtenwithapensealedwithakiss

person meg
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Where's the rest????
person Apryl
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you're feeling better. Why is it every time we show emotions that men don't like, they have to blame it on our hormones?!? I can't speak for the rest of the girls out there, but I can be a b*tch without PMS! That Severus sure is sneaky. I'm know he'll find a way to "repay" Ron.
person Apryl
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OOPS! I thought you said 'had the flu'. Get well soon!
person anya
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hope that you are feeling better. An excellent chapter.
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OoO! Excellent chapter! Mwhahaha! :)
person lisa
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank god Hermione was able to convince Ron or thye'd be in trouble. and I am glad to see Severus so forgiving lol even thopugh it seems it was only half forgiving. Perhaps Ron needs to worry still. Good chappie. Jealousy and the spitting contest seem to abound lol. More please. Update soon please. and ugg I know how that flu bug is. I had ti for a bit. and it sucked and it's hard to be sick and have a baby sick too. Goodluck dear, I know what you are going through. get well.
person Anon
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Very good chapter. Can't wait to read more.
person Barbara
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great update, well worth the wait.
person angel
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
man .. poor sev ... please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel
person joanna-archer
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter. Please update soon.