rate_review Reviews

Not bad, not bad at all. Overall, the writing is good, with few errors that I can see. Formatting, grammar, and spelling are quite above par, and any errors aren't noticeable due to above average story flow. It is nice to see that there are those out there that paid attention to their lessons in school. :)

I do hope that Hermione will be able to resolve things with Ron. Sounds like Ron was being a prat though. Hermione, then Lavender, than back to Hermione? What is wrong with this picture? In this case it looks like Ron was just looking to get laid with whoever would put out for him. Nice complex interrelationships going, and I commend you.

I shall be looking forward to chapters ten and beyond.

OoO! Exciting chapter! :D

Okay - loving the story, but I am having trouble with one thing. I CANNOT wait for the next chapter! Please, please, please update soon.

Sweet i would love an update when possible thank you!

wow that was great ..hmm what dose is will say ..and what memories did he leave for them ... please please please please update soon i would love to read more.... later for now

angel

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Excellent chapter!

Great story! but please don't forget to update Bloodbound i am getting ancshous to read more and hope your life is not getting too much in the way and everything is going good, no great!!

wow!!! this story is intense!!!!! I love it!! :)

Poor Hermione! Quite a difficult situation she's in. And Severus too. Very sad, intense and well written.

Love the angst (really! ^^). More please?!