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December 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Boy do you have balls, Snowhite....Not a single story under your belt and you have the nerve to criticize this story in such a way that can ONLY be described as a flame through and through. If you didn't like the story, you shouldn't have read it. And to have the gall to claim you're sorry if it "sounds" like a flame? Cheap and tacky. If you're so "versed" in how this story should be, then perhaps you ought to have a shot at writing it yourself.
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October 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
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August 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please, do not take offence by this comment, but Hermione acts like a greedy whore in this story. She's frighteningly OOC and enjoys being fucked by both Severus and Ron. Seriously, this is completely absurd, and there isn't a single chapter that makes sense.
I suggest you keep an eye on the characters next time you write a fic, 'cause they were ALL Mary-Sues in this story. It's a pity, for this fic could have been a really good one if you had not fucked it up the way you did.
I'm sorry if this sounds like a flame, but I'm just voicing your opinion.
I suggest you keep an eye on the characters next time you write a fic, 'cause they were ALL Mary-Sues in this story. It's a pity, for this fic could have been a really good one if you had not fucked it up the way you did.
I'm sorry if this sounds like a flame, but I'm just voicing your opinion.
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June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oops... I meant, MY opinion
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September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
When is this being finished????
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August 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can please write some more chapters?
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June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very good storyline, I even feel sorry for Ron. Can't wait for an update
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June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'll be brief - Ch. too short, want more, don't mind waiting, keep writing! [Thanks]
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June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have been following this fanfic from the start and I think it's GREAT! I can't wait for the next chapter. I check back a lot :)