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by autumnRose88

person hfreak
schedule November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Holy freaking God! Very well done.
person Lina
schedule December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was... whoa!
person sticky
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
11 inches, eh?
person Annie
schedule November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you know my favorite thing about this one-shot was that you had harry cum prematurly. most auhors dont and seeing as harry and hermione are teens he would most likly cum before hermione. so this is very very good, keep up the great work.
person Tina
schedule September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I would Like to see more of this story. You are a very good writer.
person Anon
schedule August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice
person Mena
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"Harry held her face and drew her in for a hot kiss, his hands trying to unclasp her bra. He slowly kneaded her full breasts and played with her nipple..." Interesting story, but how is it that Harry has three hands? He holds her face, tries to open her bra AND kneads her breasts all at once.
person Anon
schedule August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
an 11 inch cock....a bit unrealistic.
person brandon
schedule August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very good story.
person CPoulsen
schedule August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very good, i thoght it was great u should write more stories like this. i read it like 5 times before i moved on to something else but i think ur an awsome writer. good luck with ur next one!! :)